Awesome story, Jen! Love your Ronon voice - nice true to character friendship with him and Sheppard - plus, he plays the nursemaid so well! ;) Lovely vivid descriptions of the environment, and the bridge is almost a character. Thanks for sharing!
P.S. - wouldn't an infirmary epilogue with lots of team love, Sheppard-coddling, guilty!Rodney,etc. in the 'wet' version be nice, hmm? ;)
Author's Response:
If I could still write fics, that would be a great idea. :-)